I’ve seen some inspiring marketing strategies from Best Buy lately. Unfortunately, the email designs have been a little lackluster. With a few adjustments, however, these emails could really stand out. Check out some of the ideas they’re bringing to the table and my suggestions about how to improve the email experience.
From: Best Buy
Subject Line: Man Caves and She Sheds—the ultimate getaways
I love the idea of the “makeover” email. The before and after room transformation is a fun, compelling, and original idea. Imagine how this could be applied across other brands. I’d LOVE to see a before and after makeover from a clothing or makeup retailer! As for the design, I like that they provided before and after photos. But the pros stop there. This email has a lack of hierarchy, too much information, not enough flow, and the supporting content doesn’t have enough tie-in so it feels almost unrelated.
From: Best Buy
Subject Line: ✈ Don’t Delay! Tech you need for your next trip.
“Six Activities for Family Fun.” This email focuses on fun ways to spend your summer and features products that make each activity possible. It’s a great soft sale, making the focus the activities instead of the products. I like the product cutouts that overlay the environment photos. It helps add dimension and ties the activities and products together. But, there is a lot of room for improvement with this email. The biggest missed opportunity has to do with the images. On the landing page each picture has a fun animation, but they didn’t include it in the email. This could have really made this email POP in a fun way. I would also suggest losing the 3 subsections (adventurous days, peaceful nights and connected at all times) — they create unnecessary division. Staggering the images would also add some much needed flow to this design. Finally, although the copy for each activity is short, they could use titles for even quicker scanning: Scavenger Hunt, Family 5K, Movie Night, and Staycation.
From: Best Buy
Subject Line: Got an appetite for fright?
Best Buy offers up 5 ways to make your house spooky for Halloween. They have some great ideas that are original (electronics that turn on unexpectedly and objects that move on their own), trendy (head in a jar) and awesome (who knew you could make your own two way mirror so easily?!). The pranks are quickly and easily explained, each with their own how-to video. It’s clear that a lot of thought was put into these. However, the email fell short by a landslide on this one. It doesn’t give any indication about what type of pranks can be found by clicking through. The lack of imagery and design really is a bummer. They also missed a BIG opportunity by not including an animated gif of the video/s from the landing page. On the plus side, the text is concise and scannable, so at least people know there are haunted tips to be found. But without any teasers, it’s not as likely to get many clicks.
From: Best Buy
Subject Line: Hey McFly—The Future is Here!
Movie fans around the world were celebrating October 21st this year for a unique reason. This was the day that Marty McFly and Doc jumped into the future in the classic Back to the Future sequel. Countless people were dressing up, watching the movie and sharing this event through social media. However, not a lot of retailers were cashing in on this craze. Best Buy was one of the few. They were able to stay current, to recognize chatter in social media and keep up with what people are interested in. Their landing page evaluated which tech from the movie actually became reality. It included everything from the hover board to the food hydration machine. I found the concept smart and fun. But, like the other examples, the email was lacking. On a positive note, the copy was concise and scannable. The subject line was clever. The hero image was a nice way to set the mood of the email – bringing back the nostalgia. But what the email is missing is a preview of some of the tech from the landing page. Rather than using a general hero image, I would have preferred to see staggered images of scenes from the movie with the tech they touch on.
Bottom line: Put the same amount of thought into your emails as you do for your landing pages. If you take the time to make a video or animation, include it in the email. Also make sure to keep in mind email design best practices: scalability, hierarchy, and flow. No matter how good your landing page is, without a compelling email, no one will see it.