From: Forever 21
Subject Line: A (F)IT Girl: Tips From SELF Magazine
There’s a lot to like about this gem from Forever 21. The clothing retailer steps up their game by making the email all about the workout. They offer 3 muscle-building moves to add to your routine. Each move is paired with an image of a model in fitness attire that can be purchased. The design is inspiring with many positive takeaways.
Let’s count the things I love about it:
1) Flow. I love the line that draws your eye down the page from the very beginning. The movement continues by use of staggered imagery and text placement.
2) Scanability. The bold and concise headlines make it quick and easy to read.
3) Organization. The large pink numbers provide nice separation between sections. They keep the email from becoming a jumbled mess with no end in sight.
4) Style. The editorial type layout resembles that of a magazine (after all the subject line says the tips come from SELF magazine).
5) Depth. The overlapping imagery in varying sizes adds interest to the design.
6) Theme. The variety of image types include products, exercise equipment, and motivational signs. The image mix adds to the feel of the email so it doesn’t look product driven.
7) Details. The careful attention to alignment gives the design a finished feel. For example: In the first section the number 1, the title and the copy box are all top-aligned. In the next section the vertical lines align with the title and the copy block.
As much as I adore this email, there are a few things I would change:
1) Clearer Instructions. I would have liked to see images or illustrations of the steps for each routine. Sometimes it’s difficult to understand in words; plus, images are so much quicker to scan. If there’s not a good way to work them into the design, a link to a landing page could work.
2) The CTA. I have a few gripes on this one. There is only one call to action for the primary message, and it’s placed at the very bottom. I would have liked to see product names as links throughout the design, as well as a general button above the fold. The CTA wording is also lack luster and unclear: “Shop Now.” I would assume this would take me to fitness clothing, which it does… but then the next section says “Shop Activewear” which goes to a different landing page. So I’m left wondering what the difference is between these sections.
3) Last, I have a small copy suggestion. In the right column of the opening paragraph, it bothers me that it begins with a number. I would have rearranged copy, added words, or spelled out eighteen to make sure that didn’t happen. The length of that line compared to the others also doesn’t settle well with me. It wouldn’t be so bad anywhere else, but it doesn’t work well in the first line of a column. Nit-picky, but that’s my 2 cents.
Overall, I love this email. Nicely done!