UncommonGoods hero

No joke – this email is great.

From: UncommonGoods
Date: 6/14/17
Subject Line: Shopping for Dad Is No Joke

UncommonGoods Email

This email from UncommonGoods is filled with fun, humor, and originality. It’s the one Father’s Day email that really stood out to me this year. It has the theme: Dad always tells the lamest jokes. They encourage you to shop all the usual categories (ties, beer, gadgets, grilling, etc), but the spin is they pair each section with a cheesy and relevant joke. For example, “I used to hate facial hair. But then it grew on me. [Shop personal care].” Every joke is also being told by a character that represents that category (a mustache with legs for instance). Most of the characters are crying with laughter, which put a smile on my face. The design flows nicely, staggered left to right. I had a lot of fun reading this email and even told my son some of the jokes. It takes a lot of creativity to come up with something for every section, and they pulled it off flawlessly. (BTW, I also love the preheader: Email died laughing? View in browser.)

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Moosejaw

Hilarious Text Alert Sign Up

From: Moosejaw.com
Date: 11/16/15
Subject Line: 20% off Thermarest, Nemo, Big Agnes and more
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Go to the landing page

Moosejaw

I loved the ingenious way Moosejaw encouraged customers to sign up for text alerts. In their email, they offer a service to “escape the awkward dinner this holiday.” You choose the time and they’ll text you an excuse to get you out of Thanksgiving! At the bottom of the form they ask you if you’d be interested in receiving future text alerts. The selection of excuses are hilariously written and are sure to provoke a laugh. Check them out below!

Moosejaw

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No Pants Hero

Will Drop Pants for Clicks

Just in case you didn’t get the memo: Pants are out. I found it inconceivable and hilarious that I recieved these two strikingly similar emails in the same month. Both feature an animated GIF of a man dropping his pants to reveal his underwear. It’s sure to grab anyone’s attention and maybe even cause a little chuckle – I’ll give them that!

I’ll break down the pros and cons for each email, but I have one suggestion that applies to both. In each, the animated GIF is used to show a multitude of products. For AEO, 5 boxers are shown; in Moosejaw, 3 pants cycle through. I would suggest adding images of these products below the GIF. This will allow the subscriber to 1) get a better view of the product, 2) let them see it for a longer amount of time, and 3) will also provide a link to each product.

From: American Eagle Outfitters
Date: 10/05/15
Subject Line: Pants off, sale on.
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American Eagle Outfitters  AEO GIF

PROS

  • Large clear image and headline. It’s eye grabbing and straight forward.
  • The way the links are integrated over the hero image is a nice touch. It’s a nice way of bringing everything together into one solid message.
  • Cute preheader. “More AEO underwear = less laundry…#winning”

CONS

  • 4 Meg GIF = Slow loading time

From: Moosejaw.com
Date: 10/15/15
Subject Line: Keep Your Pants On | Free $10 for Taking a Survey
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Moosejaw  Moosejaw GIF

PROS

  • 700K GIF = Quick loading time
  • For those that read the copy, it’s hilariously well written. Here’s a snippet: “Let’s face it, nobody likes wearing pants. As a matter of fact, I’m not wearing any right now. Ever wonder why some people are jerks in the morning? It’s because they had to put on pants.”

CONS

  • Not very scannable copy. I love the humor, but titles or bolded text could help get the point across quicker for those that don’t have time to read.
  • No flow. Everything is full width and stacked. Not ideal.
  • Lack of hierarchy. The first two messages are related, but the third isn’t. It feels out of place. I suggest treating it more like a secondary message by making it smaller, or removing it entirely.

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